Friday, November 7, 2008
Free Write...
Thursday, October 23, 2008
Developing Your Character...

Character: Goerge lopez aka Charizard
Age: 15
Occupation: High School Student
I saw a group of guys riding thier scooters down the street, but this one guy just standed out. He would ride and do a these amuazing tricks .
He's 15 and was in a scooter krew which they called their self Los Razors. He's tall and athletic and also one of the coolest guy anybody could ever meet.
So Goerge's usual day is to wake up, take a shower, get ready, eat breakfast and go scooter. He meets with his krew at a freinds house where they all hang out. Once they all show up, they decide where to scooter.
Well, were ever they decide to go Goerge is always hyped up and ready to go,because Goerge's goal is to become one the best scooterist who ever lived. Goerge scooter's up and down, day and night scootering was his pasion.
Los Razors were practicing every day because their was a big competion coming up and who ever won would get half a million dollars. Goerge knew that by winning this money he, could really help out his parents. His family haved work hard all their lifes and with this money it would give them a slightly rest.
So they day came and the krew was pumped. Their were three teams, the three teams had three chances, the team best score out of three try's will win. Los Razors were up they had one minute to do all the tricks they can. When the minute was over the judges gave them a 9.
So this was Los Razors last chance. The score for the first team was 26, the second team 27 and Los Razors had 18 at the moment the needed to score a perfect 10 to win. So they started and they were doing awsome, tricks after tricks and at the last second out of nowhere Goerge comes out with a double back flip and Los Razors win!!!!!! they shout out.
Tuesday, October 7, 2008
"Setting"

I hear the fans cheering for the dodgers.
I hear the sale's man offering peanuts.
I hear baby's crying to my right.
I hear the fans booing the opposite team.
I hear the announcer explaining what happend.
I smell the fresh air in the dodgers stadium.
I smell the beer that my uncle is drinking.
I smell the bad odor from the fat guy next to me.
I smell the fresh hot dogs.
I smell my girlfriends perfume.
I feel the warm, soft hot dog in my hand.
I feel the ice cold soda.
I feel the hard uncomfortable chair.
I feel the rail i hold on to on my way to my seat.
I feel the my girlfriend when i hug her because the dodgers just scored.
I see the crowd arise in a wave form.
I see the fat guy eating a hot dog.
I see everyone wearing their dodgers gear.
I see seeds all over the floor.
I see the coach discussing the play with the umpire.
I taste the warm hot dog.
I taste the cold drink.
I taste the nachos with cheese.
I taste the cherry flavored cotton candy.
I taste the limonade flavored ice cream.